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Do you believe that dreams can sometimes predict the future?

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I don't believe that dreams can predict the future. There are two reasons. First, dreams are based on my life, so almost every dream is about the matter that can be happened in my life. Second, there is no way to prove that dreams can predict the future. So I think that dreams can't predict the future.

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Here's your edited homework, Kai!
See you in class!

Cheers,
Jean~~


I don't believe that dreams can predict the future. 
>> CORRECT~~

There are two reasons. 
>> There are two reasons for this.

First, dreams are based on my life, so almost every dream is about the matter that can be happened in my life.
>> First, dreams are based on my life, so almost every dream is about matters that can happen or that already happened in my life.

 Second, there is no way to prove that dreams can predict the future.
>> CORRECT~~

 So I think that dreams can't predict the future.
>> OR: Therefore, I believe that dreams can't predict the future.


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