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Q:If you are going to make a scrapbook, what picture and other things will you put in it?
A:I'll put many pictures about animals and I'll put the texts too.
First, I like animals so I'll put the pictures about animals so I'll make a animal scrapbook.
Second, if there are just pictures then I can't remember it's name so I'll put the texts about animals.
Last, if I make a animal scrapbook then I can remember that I saw this animals so I'll put the animal pictures and texts in my scrapbook.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

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Teacher Annie (^^)




Q: If you are going to make a scrapbook, what picture and other things will you put in it?

A: I'll put many pictures about animals and I'll put the texts too.
>>> I'll put many pictures and information about animals including some written text. 

First, I like animals so I'll put the pictures about animals so I'll make a animal scrapbook.
>>> First, I like animals so I'll put the pictures about them so I'll make an animal scrapbook.

Second, if there are just pictures then I can't remember it's name so I'll put the texts about animals.
>>> Second, if I'll just have pictures then I can't remember their names so I'll put the texts about these animals.

Last, if I make a animal scrapbook then I can remember that I saw this animals so I'll put the animal pictures and texts in my scrapbook.
>>> Lastly, if I make an animal scrapbook then I'll be able to remember that I saw these animals so I'll put their pictures and texts about them in my scrapbook.

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