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What is the most unusual thing you\'ve ever eaten. Did it taste good or bad?

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I think sturgeon eggs and goose livers are the most unusual things I've ever eaten.
When I was fourth grade in elementary school, I went to Canada and U.S.
And in Canada Montreal, there was a restauraunt, and I ate sturgeon eggs.
It was little salty, but it's taste was good.
5 days ago, I went to a restauraunt where is in Seoul because of my parents' anniversary.
And I ate goose livers in that restauraunt.
When I saw it, I thought it will be very delicious, But it was very very bad.
So I don't want to eat goose livers again.

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Hi John! Wow, that is weird. Hahaha! We all have weird foods that we have tried. We find some of them good and some are bad. It just depends on the range of your taste buds. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I think sturgeon eggs and goose livers are the most unusual things I've ever eaten.
>> CORRECT

When I was fourth grade in elementary school, I went to Canada and U.S.
>>When I was in fourth grade elementary school, I went to Canada and U.S.

And in Canada Montreal, there was a restauraunt, and I ate sturgeon eggs.
>> When I was in Montreal, Canada, there was a restaurant where I sturgeon eggs. 

It was little salty, but it's taste was good.
>> It was a little salty but it taste good. 

5 days ago, I went to a restauraunt where is in Seoul because of my parents' anniversary.
>> 5 days ago, I went to a restaurant in Seoul to celebrate my parent's anniversary. 

And I ate goose livers in that restauraunt.
>> I goose liver there. 

When I saw it, I thought it will be very delicious, But it was very very bad.
>> When I first saw it. I though it would be good but turns our it was not. 

So I don't want to eat goose livers again.
>>CORRECT
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