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1.children are playful.
2. children like snack
Children like pizza

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Hi, Dong Yun! ^^,)

Happy Children's Day!

Thank you for answering your homework. However, you didn't write your sentences correctly.
Always capitalize the first letter of the first word. Don't forget your punctuation marks, okay?
I will talk to you later in class.^^

Have a good day!

__T. Mayleen :)


1.children are playful.
>>> CORRECT - Children are playful.
2. children like snack
>>> Children like snacks.
Children like pizza
>>> CORRECT - Children like pizza.
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