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What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?

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I am positive influenced by my friends now and I think I will continue to be. One of the thing that I influenced, I become express my feelings or thoughts when I was happy or depressed. In the past, I didn't express them very well in words, whereas my friend expressed her feelings honestly at the moment. I think I learn a lot of things from my friends so I love them!

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Hi Sere,
Friends are important – they give us a feeling of belonging, bring fun and laughter, lend an extra hand, offer emotional support, and give guidance when you need it. And, whether you realize it or not, their influence goes well beyond the moment. Your close friendships help to shape the course of your life. Be friendly. 
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What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?
>>What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?
I am positive influenced by my friends now and I think I will continue to be. 
>>I am positively influenced by my friends now and I think I will continue to be a good friend. 
One of the thing that I influenced, I become express my feelings or thoughts when I was happy or depressed. 
>>One of the things that influenced me was I became expressive of my feelings or thoughts when I was happy or depressed. 
In the past, I didn't express them very well in words, whereas my friend expressed her feelings honestly at the moment. 
>> In the past, I was not very expressive about my feelings and thoughts in words, whereas my friend expressed her feelings honestly at the moment. 
I think I learn a lot of things from my friends so I love them!
>>I think I learn a lot of things from my friends so I love them!
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What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?

I am positive influenced by my friends now and I think I will continue to be. One of the thing that I influenced, I become express my feelings or thoughts when I was happy or depressed. In the past, I didn't express them very well in words, whereas my friend expressed her feelings honestly at the moment. I think I learn a lot of things from my friends so I love them!
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