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Student status

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The best things about student status is that they can learn everything from good teachers and spend a lot of time studying without interruption.
In other words, they are students, so they can study freely.
However, they may not realize about them when they are students.
Students have norms to follow to be good one but the norms may be uncomfortable for them.
They will think it is a bad thing because they don't want to follow.

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Hi Eun Ha!
I do see your point.
You have discussed the topic in detail.
The examples you gave are both practical and specific.
Keep up the good work!
~~ Teacher Sharon
The best things about student status is that they can learn everything from good teachers and spend a lot of time studying without interruption.
>> The best things about being students are that they can learn everything from good teachers and spend a lot of time studying without interruption.
In other words, they are students, so they can study freely.
>> Correct
However, they may not realize about them when they are students.
>> However, they may not realize these when they're still students.
Students have norms to follow to be good one but the norms may be uncomfortable for them.
>> Students have norms to follow to be good ones but the norms may be uncomfortable for them.
They will think it is a bad thing because they don't want to follow.
>> Correct
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