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Do you believe in superstitions?

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Do you believe in superstitions? If yes, give me an example of superstition in Korea that you believe in. If no, explain why.

I dont' belive it, but I care about it.
Before the exam, if I eat seaweed soup, I fail the exam.
Actually, I totally belive it, but I never eat seaweed soup,
Up to now, many supersition in korea has been pazssed down.
Most of people care about supersitition.

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Hi Monica Superstitions are actually part of a countries culture and tradition. It is passed through different generations. Some people believe it and some don't. It just depends on our perspectives. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I dont' belive it, but I care about it.
>> I don't believe in it but I care about it. 

Before the exam, if I eat seaweed soup, I fail the exam.
>> Before an exam and you eat seaweed soup, you will fail in it.

Actually, I totally belive it, but I never eat seaweed soup.
Actually, I don't think it's true but I still follow it. 

Up to now, many supersition in korea has been pazssed down.
>> Until now, superstitions in Korea are being passed down.

Most of people care about supersitition.
>> Most people don't care about superstitions. 

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