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What is the most unusual thing you\'ve ever eaten. Did it taste good or bad?

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do you know Stinky Tofu? its smells is very very bad. really. I ate this. as soon as I ate, I throw it out from my mouse. actully when it opened Stinky Tofu cans, it smells like I am in drain. but some people was like its smells is bad but taste is fine. it's fake. when I ate this, the food show me why its smells is suck. after then I don't eat food which smells bad.

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Hi Tobby! Wow, that is weird. Hahaha! We all have weird foods that we have tried. We find some of them good and some are bad. It just depends on the range of your taste buds. :) 

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do you know Stinky Tofu? its smells is very very bad. really. 
>> Do you know stinky tofu? It smells really bad. 

I ate this. as soon as I ate, I throw it out from my mouse. 
>> When I ate it, I spit it out of my mouth immediately. 

actully when it opened Stinky Tofu cans, it smells like I am in drain. 
>> Actually when I opened it, it smelled like I was in a sewage drain. 

but some people was like its smells is bad but taste is fine. 
>> But for some people, it doesn't smell and taste as bad. 

it's fake. when I ate this, the food show me why its smells is suck. 
>> It's not true. When they showed it to me, it smells so bad. 

after then I don't eat food which smells bad.
>> After that, I don't eat foo with bad smell. 
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