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What is the most unusual thing you¡¯ve ever eaten

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I think I don¡¯t really try unusual food. I like to try new foods but I think those were not unusual food. Maybe if I travel other country then I can experience some unusual things. I hope that it will tastes good.

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Hi Heidi! Maybe someday you can try it.  Hehehe! We all have weird foods that we have tried. We find some of them good and some are bad. It just depends on the range of your taste buds. :) 

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I think I don¡¯t really try unusual food. 
>> I think I haven't tried any unusual food. 

I like to try new foods but I think those were not unusual food. 
>>I like to try new food but I think those were not unusual food. 

Maybe if I travel other country then I can experience some unusual things. 
>> Maybe if I travel other other countries, I can experience some unusual things. 

I hope that it will tastes good.
>> I hope that it will taste good.

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