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What are the rather light topics you have with your friends yet would require you to talk about thei

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There would be many topics where I discuss the “pros and cons” and “for or against it.” I would say the lightest case would be relationship matters. There are always fierce debates, and each person must come up with their idea regarding gossips or friend’s relationship issues. However, the conclusion is always fruitless and sometimes stressful because a friend who brought up the subject solves the problems as she wishes. Typically, this matter is stressful because I never had a boyfriend before, so I do not know how it feels when there are conflicts. However, many friends always join me in the conversation because I am a good listener. Most importantly, I do not think of relationship problems as significant issues, and it is not a good idea to listen to others before talking to the partner. Accordingly, I would rather speak about complex matters such as global affairs or job hunting.

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There would be many topics where I discuss the “pros and cons” and “for or against it.” 
>>>>  correct 
I would say the lightest case would be relationship matters. 
>>>>   correct
There are always fierce debates, and each person must come up with their idea regarding gossips or friend’s relationship issues. 
>>>> OR: There are always fierce debates, and each person must come up with his/her idea regarding gossips or friend’s relationship issues.    
However, the conclusion is always fruitless and sometimes stressful because a friend who brought up the subject solves the problems as she wishes. 
>>>> OR: However, the conclusion is always fruitless and sometimes stressful because the friend who is directly involved in the problem solves the problems as she wishes.   
Typically, this matter is stressful because I never had a boyfriend before, so I do not know how it feels when there are conflicts. 
>>>>  correct 
However, many friends always join me in the conversation because I am a good listener. 
>>>> ORHowever, many friends always make me take part in the conversation because I am a good listener.
>>>> OR: However, many friends always get me involved in the conversation because I am a good listener.    
Most importantly, I do not think of relationship problems as significant issues, and it is not a good idea to listen to others before talking to the partner. 
>>>> correct    
Accordingly, I would rather speak about complex matters such as global affairs or job hunting.
>>>>  correct 

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