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My hidden card

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As you know, I¡¯m working in trading company and we mostly produce and export such garments.
So natually, I have been interested in fashion and beauty.
I like to wear chic style fasion and do natual make-up, which point is natural glow skin and eyebrow texture.
And a warn tone is well matched with my face color.
So the most of my lipstick is color coral, dried rose or tone downed orange.
And I never forget wear the earings, which is my hidden card.

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Hi Joanna!
I do see your point.
You have discussed the topic in detail.
The examples you gave are both practical and specific.
Keep up the good work!
~~ Teacher Sharon
As you know, I¡¯m working in trading company and we mostly produce and export such garments.
>> As you know, I¡¯m working for a trading company and we mostly produce and export garments.
So natually, I have been interested in fashion and beauty.
>> So naturally, I have been interested in fashion and beauty.
I like to wear chic style fasion and do natual make-up, which point is natural glow skin and eyebrow texture.
>> I like to wear chic outfits and do natural make-up where the main points are natural and glowing skin and eyebrow texture.
And a warn tone is well matched with my face color.
>> A warm tone matches my skin very well. 
So the most of my lipstick is color coral, dried rose or tone downed orange.
>> So most of the lipstick that I have are coral, dried rose and toned down orange. 
And I never forget wear the earings, which is my hidden card.
>> I also never forget to wear earrings which is my hidden card. 
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