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Q:Why is it that your country celebrates Valentine's Day in a different way? Why is it that women give the flowers?
A:I think it's because Valentine's Day is loving day and, women give chocolates.
First, Valentine's Day is the day that expressing love.
Second, women express love to men by giving chocolates.
Last, I don't know thy women give chocolate to men because women can give men many things.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


Q: Why is it that your country celebrates Valentine's Day in a different way? Why is it that women give the flowers?

A: I think it's because Valentine's Day is loving day and, women give chocolates.
>>> I think it's because Valentine's Day is a lovely day and so, women give chocolates.

First, Valentine's Day is the day that expressing love.
>>> First, Valentine's Day is the day for expressing love to other people.

Second, women express love to men by giving chocolates.
>>> Second, women express their love to men by giving chocolates.

Last, I don't know thy women give chocolate to men because women can give men many things.
>>> Lastly, I don't know thy women give chocolate to men because women can give men many things.

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