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Homework 5.10.MON

작성자: 박*연
2021-05-10 654

회원님의 영작문

What's your first thought when you woke up this morning?
First thing I thought this morning was " I don't want to get up from my sweet bed." " Why should I go to school? ".
These were the first words that come to my mind first.
I slept late yesterday. I slept at 2:00 am. So I was too sleepy to get up and prepare for school.
Also, it was very cold outside this morning. I was shivering like a little lamb that has no fur.
One more reason that I didn't want to go to school was that I have 2 math classes on my class timetable.
The worst thing in math class was I will learn a new unit.
But not like my imagination, the math class went pretty well.
And my bed is pretty big for one person, and it's so cozy.
Especially the cold days, I never want to come out of my bed.
Today morning was rainy too, so I wanted to stay in a cozy place.
However almost all daily mornings, I don't want to go to school.
But I think I will wake up with a positive mind if I sleep early and sleep deeply.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Claire!
This was very well-written! Great job. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed reading this. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

First thing I thought this morning was " I don't want to get up from my sweet bed." " Why should I go to school? ".
>>CORRECT!
These were the first words that come to my mind first.
>>CORRECT!
I slept late yesterday. I slept at 2:00 am. So I was too sleepy to get up and prepare for school.
>>CORRECT!
Also, it was very cold outside this morning. I was shivering like a little lamb that has no fur.
>>CORRECT!
One more reason that I didn't want to go to school was that I have 2 math classes on my class timetable.
>>One more reason that I didn't want to go to school was that I had 2 math classes on my class timetable.
The worst thing in math class was I will learn a new unit.
>>The worst thing in math class was I had to learn a new unit.
But not like my imagination, the math class went pretty well.
>>CORRECT!
And my bed is pretty big for one person, and it's so cozy.
>>CORRECT!
Especially the cold days, I never want to come out of my bed.
>>Especially on cold days, I never want to get out of my bed.
Today morning was rainy too, so I wanted to stay in a cozy place.
>>This morning, it was rainy too, so I wanted to stay in a cozy place.
However almost all daily mornings, I don't want to go to school.
>>However, in most mornings, I don't want to go to school.
But I think I will wake up with a positive mind if I sleep early and sleep deeply.
>>CORRECT!
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