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Q:Why is the piggy bank shaped like a pig, why did they not use another animal?
A:I think it's because pig means a lot of things.
First, if pig means a lot of things then there will be many money in piggy bank when someone breaks piggy bank.
Second, other animals don't means something is about money or good thing about money so I think piggy bank is shaped like pig.
Last, I think pig is shaped very simple then other animals so I think piggy bank is shaped like a pig.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
  


Q: Why is the piggy bank shaped like a pig, why did they not use another animal?

A: I think it's because pig means a lot of things.
>>> I think it's because pig could contain a lot of things.

First, if pig means a lot of things then there will be many money in piggy bank when someone breaks piggy bank.
>>> First, if a pig could contain a lot of things then there will be a lot of money in a piggy bank when someone breaks it.

Second, other animals don't means something is about money or good thing about money so I think piggy bank is shaped like pig.
>>> Second, other animals don't mean something which is related to money or any good thing about money so I think that is why a piggy bank is shaped like a pig.

Last, I think pig is shaped very simple then other animals so I think piggy bank is shaped like a pig.
>>> Lastly, I think the pig is shaped very simply than other animals so I think that is the reason why a piggy bank is shaped like a pig.
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