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In fact, when my younger brother and I go to the VIPS with my family, we eat fried rice, which is basically the first food we eat. Because the fried rice here is more delicious than the fried rice made by my mom... (This is a really real secret!!>

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Hi there Maria!

Thank you for sending me the photos and this composition. I felt very hungry when I was looking at them. Anyway, this is not my first time to hear about the VIPs. it means that you are a VERY IMPORTANT PERSON to be able to eat here.

Well, I will definitely eat there someday. Thanks to your recommendation!

See you soon.

-T. Donna =)

In fact, when my younger brother and I go to the VIPS with my family, we eat fried rice, which is basically the first food we eat. 
>> Correct!

Because the fried rice here is more delicious than the fried rice made by my mom... 
>> Correct!

(This is a really real secret!!>
>> Correct! Hahaha!

But the only thing that has to be done is that all the people who make fried rice here are skilled chefs!! 

It has to be. 
>> Correct!

Anyway, these VIPs are the most crowded, especially on Saturdays, Christmas, and especially when the whole country is off. 
>> Correct!

Because I am very good at cooking here, and the atmosphere is very good. 
>> Because they are very good at cooking here, and the atmosphere is very good. 

As you can see from the pictures, the atmosphere here is very good!! 
>> Correct!

When you come to Korea, please try eating out with your family here!! 
>> Correct!

I recommend to you~^^ 
>> I recommend it to you.
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