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My favorite park is the citizen park in busan because it is good nature,and there are many tree in the park.
The citizen park in busan are very clean and wild.

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My favorite park is the citizen park in busan because it is good nature,and there are many tree in the park.
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The citizen park in busan are very clean and wild.
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