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Q:Why is it that a lot of people are trilled in scaring themselves with horror movies etc?
A:I think it's because they want to prove that they are not scared about horror movies or they want to follow the scary ambiance.
First, many people want to prove that they can do many things even they can't so I think watching horror movies are the kind of this.
Second, most people watch horror movies when it's dark or rainy so I think they do it because they want to make ambiance more scary.
Last, I think they watch horror movies when it's dark or rainy because they want to scare another person who is staying with he or she.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


Q: Why is it that a lot of people are trilled in scaring themselves with horror movies etc?

A: I think it's because they want to prove that they are not scared about horror movies or they want to follow the scary ambiance.
>>> I think it's because they want to prove that they are not scared in horror movies or maybe they want to feel the scary ambiance. 

First, many people want to prove that they can do many things even they can't so I think watching horror movies are the kind of this.
>>>  First, many people want to prove that they can do a lot of things even if they, in reality, can't. An example would be watching horror movies. 

Second, most people watch horror movies when it's dark or rainy so I think they do it because they want to make ambiance more scary.
>>> Second, most people watch horror movies when it's dark or rainy so I think they do it because they want to feel a scary ambiance/atmosphere. 

Last, I think they watch horror movies when it's dark or rainy because they want to scare another person who is staying with he or she.
>>> Lastly, I think they watch horror movies when it's dark or rainy because they want to scare another person who is staying with them at that moment, could be a friend or a family member. 
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