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In this modern world that we live in, do you think that war is a good solution to settle disputes between countries? Why?

Of course, war is not admirable, but we as Korea should be prepared for any war and war can be the last method of making peace of Korea.

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Of course, war is not admirable, but we as Korea should be prepared for any war and war can be the last method of making peace of Korea.
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