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Why are goals important?

Because we can feel sense of accomplishment when we achieve our goal, It will help self confidence as well.
It is also important to not only results but also steps to goals. Failure or success to goals is subsequent point.
Furthermore, life can be boring or unhappy if we don't have goals. It is one of the reasons for depressions.
Goals are important for our development.

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Good afternoon, Ji Eun! That was well-said! I also agree that our goals make us improve and make us enjoy life! May you continue to achieve your goals.-Faith-
Why are goals important?
>> CORRECT
Because we can feel sense of accomplishment when we achieve our goal, 
>> Goals are important because we can feel the sense of accomplishment when we achieve them.
It will help self confidence as well.
>> It will help boost our self-confidence as well.
It is also important to not only results but also steps to goals.
>> It is also important to not only value the results but also the steps towards our goals.
Failure or success to goals is subsequent point.
>> The failure or the success towards our goals is the substantial point.
Furthermore, life can be boring or unhappy if we don't have goals. 
>> CORRECT
It is one of the reasons for depressions.
>> CORRECT
 OR It can cause depression.
Goals are important for our development.
>> CORRECT
OR Our growth depends on the goals we set.
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