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sometimes I tell happy things to someone to cherr someone.
or we talk about what's wrong, then most of my friends are happy.
and some times we play together and then sometimes they forget what they are sad about.
and thats how I make someone feel better again.



thanks^^

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Hello Ruby,
I think cheering your friends up or making them talk about their concerns would really help them feel better. ^ ^
-Rachel 
sometimes I tell happy things to someone to cherr someone.
>> Sometimes, I tell happy things to cheer someone up. 
or we talk about what's wrong, then most of my friends are happy.
>> Or we talk about what's wrong. Them most of my friends feel happy afterwards.
and some times we play together and then sometimes they forget what they are sad about.
>> correct
and that's how I make someone feel better again.
>> correct
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