¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What do you think of space tourism?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*Áø
2021-05-19 633

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I think space tourism is hard thing to do. We are not threatened with trivial things as we travel to other countries. But if we travel to space, we need to take care of any trivial things. And , going to space is not easy. To go to space, we have to train as strong as astronauts. Also we need lots of money to go to space. That is really hard to normal people. But if someone does all this, I think that person can go space tour.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Thank you for this Amy.

I think space tourism is hard thing to do. 
>>> I think space tourism is a hard thing to do.   
We are not threatened with trivial things as we travel to other countries. 
>>> correct
>>>  OR:  We are not threatened by trivial things as we travel to other countries.  
But if we travel to space, we need to take care of any trivial things. 
>>> OR: But if we travel to space, we need to be cautious about all trivial things.   
And, going to space is not easy. 
>>> correct  
To go to space, we have to train as strong as astronauts. 
>>> correct  
Also we need lots of money to go to space. 
>>> We also need lots of money to go to space.  
That is really hard to normal people. 
>>That is really hard for normal people.   
But if someone does all this, I think that person can go space tour.
>>>  But if someone does all this, I think that person can go for a space tour.  
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
110138 Homework. ±è*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 401
110137 home work ½É*¼º ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 4
110136 30 page ¿À*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 493
110135 Homework🌈 ¹Ú*¸® ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 444
110134 Has technology made our lives easier or more complicated? ÃÖ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 416
110133 homework ¹é*Çö ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 604
110132 Homework ÀÓ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 4
110131 People these days watch TV, films and other programs alone... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 593
110130 Hi~ James~ ^^ ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 2
110129 What do you need to get used to doing now? ÇÏ*Á¶ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 551
110128 Homework ¾ç*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-07-19 0
110127 Has technology made our lives easier or more complicated?... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-07-18 0
110126 HOMEWORK ±Ç*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-18 453
110125 When I can\'t asleep. ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-18 3
110124 Can you talk about three of your favorite things to eat? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-07-18 523
110123 Korea Struggles to Contain Coronavirus Surge À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-07-18 0
110122 What is the worst problem you have ever faced in your life and... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-07-17 0
110121 Can you talk about three of your favorite things to eat? ³ë*ÀÌ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-17 1
110120 Fire and firefighter ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-17 550
110119 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-17 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04