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Do you think sending your loved ones to nursing homes is a kind of abandonment?

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No, I don¡¯t. There are some cases that they can take care of their loved ones. Then it¡¯s better to send them to nursing homes. Nowadays. there nursing homes that have good circumstance. So I don¡¯t think it¡¯s a kind of adandonment.

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Hi HeidiThe reasons articulated by families for transferring their loved ones to nursing homes include the need for higher professional care, health care , behaviors associated with dementia and the need for more assistance. Some people agree with this method and some don't. Regardless of so, we should know the story first before judging these families. :) 

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No, I don¡¯t. 
>> CORRECT

There are some cases that they can take care of their loved ones. 
>> There are some cases that they can take care of your loved ones. 

Then it¡¯s better to send them to nursing homes. 
>> CORRECT

Nowadays. there nursing homes that have good circumstance. 
>> Nowadays. there are nursing homes that have good environment. 

So I don¡¯t think it¡¯s a kind of adandonment.
>> So, I don¡¯t think it¡¯s a kind of abandonment.
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