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Helen Keller!

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A very interesting and also very shocking person I know is Helen Keller, who everyone probably knows. Helen was a very unfortunate child that she had since she was born with three disorders she can not see, hear, and can't speak. She was born in the England and lived with her mom and dad in a remote place for the people, but she was instinctive, not rationally, because she couldn't see and hear. This case I think she was feel like so scary. She was like a beast. But after her teacher helped her, and she got better and better until she eventually became a novelist. When I read Helen Keller's story, she some how made me think, "I can do it too." so I thought she was a really interesting person.

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Hi Maria!

Hellen Keller is one of the most inspiring women in history that we study in school. She was not hampered by the fact of her blindness and saw the world differently. She created a big impact to those losing hope and that is a beautiful and interesting thing about her.

For us who have eyes and can we imagine the possibilities we have? If one cannot see how fortunate s/he is, then, they are the real blind ones.

Well done Maria! See you.

-T. Donna =)

A very interesting and also very shocking person I know is Helen Keller, who everyone probably knows. 
>> Correct!

Helen was a very unfortunate child that she had since she was born with three disorders she can not see, hear, and can't speak. 
>> Correct!
Or: Helen was a very unfortunate child that she had since she was born three disorders: she can not see, hear, and can't speak. 

She was born in the England and lived with her mom and dad in a remote place for the people, but she was instinctive, not rationally, because she couldn't see and hear. 
>> She was born in England and lived with her mom and dad in a remote place far from people, but she was instinctive, not rational, because she couldn't see and hear. 

This case I think she was feel like so scary. 
>> In her case, I think she feels very scared.

She was like a beast. 
>> Correct!

But after her teacher helped her, and she got better and better until she eventually became a novelist. 
>> But after her teacher helped her, she got better and better until she eventually became a novelist. 

When I read Helen Keller's story, she some how made me think, "I can do it too." so I thought she was a really interesting person.
>> Correct!
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