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How do you comfort your friends?

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When I comfort my friends, I go for a meal or go to a nice outside cafe.
Normally I can help my friends who is depressed.
I have ever talked on the phone for a very long time to comfort my friend who seperate with boy friend.

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Hi Lily,
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on the homework question!
Please keep up the good work!
Talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
How do you comfort your friends?
When I comfort my friends, I go for a meal or go to a nice outside cafe.
>>When I comfort my friends, I invite them for a meal or I take them to a nice cafe outside.
Normally I can help my friends who is depressed.
>>Normally, I can help my friends who are depressed.
I have ever talked on the phone for a very long time to comfort my friend who seperate with boy friend.
>>I have talked to my friends over the phone for a very long time in order to comfort them, especially those who broke up with a boyfriend.

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