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Q: What can you say about a fashion trend which is usually ripped?
A:I can say about it as if a person fall down when he is wearing ripped pants then he will hurt more then he is wearing not ripped pants.
First, it's because if a person, wearing ripped pants, fall down, his skin will hit by floor so ripped pants cannot protect our skin.
Second, and if a person is wearing not ripped pants, then that pants can protect the person's skin, so the person will hurt not that much.
Last, but someone wear it as fashion, so I think ripped pants is not that bad as fashion.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

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Teacher Annie (^^)


Q: What can you say about a fashion trend which is usually ripped?

A: I can say about it as if a person fall down when he is wearing ripped pants then he will hurt more then he is wearing not ripped pants.
>>> Every time I see someone wearing ripped jeans, it seems like he/she fell down from somewhere. I think it would be safer for them if they will wear something not ripped. 

First, it's because if a person, wearing ripped pants, fall down, his skin will hit by floor so ripped pants cannot protect our skin.
>>> First, if a person wearing ripped jeans will fall down then he will have protection from a direct cut on his skin. 

Second, and if a person is wearing not ripped pants, then that pants can protect the person's skin, so the person will hurt not that much.
>>> Second, someone who is wearing a pair of jeans that is not ripped will have protection and he'll not be hurt that much. 

Last, but someone wear it as fashion, so I think ripped pants is not that bad as fashion.
>>> Lastly, some people wear ripped jeans for fashion so I think it's not that bad as fashion. 
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