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HOMEWORK:
What's the best music video you have watched? Tell me about it.

My favorite music video is Celebrity released by IU.
Because the harmony of lyrics and screen matches really well.
The screen looks very classy, modern, and also soft.
Also, this music video edited very well.
I'm very impressed when the screen changes to the other screen.
The screen changes so softly.
The screen fades softly and changes to another screen so naturally.
I really liked the method of editing.
And the stage is decorated well.
I think there were lots of efforts of steps before this music video released.
Most importantly IU's music is so amazing.
Her music is very low and soft like a ballad but sometimes her voice goes up and shows us a high ton performance.
When I watch her music video, it's so satisfying.
If there is a person who didn't watch her music video yet, then I would explain how nice the music video of IU is.

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Hello Claire!
This was a great composition. Keep up the good work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

My favorite music video is Celebrity released by IU.
>>My favorite music video is Celebrity by IU.
Because the harmony of lyrics and screen matches really well.
>>It's because the harmonization, the lyrics and the scenes match really well.
The screen looks very classy, modern, and also soft.
>>CORRECT!
Also, this music video edited very well.
>>Also, this music video was edited very well.
I'm very impressed when the screen changes to the other screen.
>>I'm very impressed when the scene changes to another scene.
The screen changes so softly.
>>The scene transitions softly.
The screen fades softly and changes to another screen so naturally.
>>One scene fades softly and changes to another scene so naturally.
I really liked the method of editing.
>>CORRECT!
And the stage is decorated well.
>>CORRECT!
I think there were lots of efforts of steps before this music video released.
>>I think there were lots of effort and steps taken before this music video released.
Most importantly IU's music is so amazing.
>>CORRECT!
Her music is very low and soft like a ballad but sometimes her voice goes up and shows us a high ton performance.
>>Her music is very low and soft like a ballad but sometimes her voice goes up and shows us a high-toned singing performance.
When I watch her music video, it's so satisfying.
>>CORRECT!
If there is a person who didn't watch her music video yet, then I would explain how nice the music video of IU is.
>>If there is a person who hasn't watched her music video yet, then I would explain how nice the music video of IU is.
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