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Cultures and traditions are different in each country so what advice would you give a foreigner visiting your country who would like to show good manners?

In my country, there's a lot of things to show good manners. And firstly, I would recommend using honorific words when saying something to people that never seen before, especially those who are older. If we don't use honorific words in the previous situation, we think it's rude behavior. And the other thing is, not to aim at people with a finger. I don't know the exact reason why but it's considered a bad manner as well.

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Hi Homer! South Korea has certain customs, traditions, and rules of etiquette that have developed over the years, and many of them are different than what occurs in most other countries. Same goes with other countries that's why when we visit other places, we should be aware about it.. It¡¯s much better to be informed so you can make the best impression possible. Not only will you honor the group, but you¡¯ll also increase your chances of being invited out again.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon :) 

In my country, there's a lot of things to show good manners. 
>> In my country, there's a lot of ways to show good manners. 

And firstly, I would recommend using honorific words when saying something to people that never seen before, especially those who are older. 
>> First, I would recommend using honorific words when talking to people that you met for the first time; especially to those who are older. 

If we don't use honorific words in the previous situation, we think it's rude behavior. 
>> CORRECT

And the other thing is, not to aim at people with a finger. 
>> Another thing is that you should not aim at other people using your finger. 

I don't know the exact reason why but it's considered a bad manner as well.
>> CORRECT
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