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What\'s your most valued possession?

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What's your most valued possession?

Actually, I don't have the most value possession.
In the past time, I used to have some luxury bag and oi treased it so much.
Now, i didn't bring it and the luxury bags are in the closet.
I don't want to obsess somthing, I live a free life.

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Hi Monica! Having valued possessions generates lots of positive feelings which make you feel good and enhance your mood, and even inspire or motivate you. It also give you sense of control; as you have ownership over precious possessions and this sense of control make you feel secure.

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Actually, I don't have the most value possession.
>> Actually, I don't have any valued possession.

In the past time, I used to have some luxury bag and oi treased it so much.
>> In the past, I used to have lots of luxury bags and I get teased by it a lot. 

Now, i didn't bring it and the luxury bags are in the closet.
>> Now, I don't use them and they are placed in the closet. 

I don't want to obsess somthing, I live a free life.
>> I don't want to obsess on something. I am living a free life. 
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