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I think the best way to know the country's tradition and culture is to go to the exhibition hall. I also like to travel and know the culture of other countries. In other countries, I learned the fastest and most information when I visited a cultural exhibition hall or visited a memorial hall. Another way is to hang out with a local friend or a daily guide. The culture of the country is best known by its own people. So it's most comfortable and easy to know with them.

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Hi Steve! South Korea has certain customs, traditions, and rules of etiquette that have developed over the years, and many of them are different than what occurs in most other countries. Same goes with other countries that's why when we visit other places, we should be aware about it.. It¡¯s much better to be informed so you can make the best impression possible. Not only will you honor the group, but you¡¯ll also increase your chances of being invited out again.

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I think the best way to know the country's tradition and culture is to go to the exhibition hall. 
>> CORRECT

I also like to travel and know the culture of other countries. 
>> CORRECT

In other countries, I learned the fastest and most information when I visited a cultural exhibition hall or visited a memorial hall. 
>> In other countries, I learned most information the fastest when I visit cultural exhibition halls or visit memorial halls. 

Another way is to hang out with a local friend or a daily guide. 
>> Another way is to hang out with a local friends or a daily guide. 

The culture of the country is best known by its own people. 
>> CORRECT

So it's most comfortable and easy to know with them.
>>So it's more comfortable and easy to know them.

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