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Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do y

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There are a lot of renowned university around the world which many people would like to enter. Harvard university is well-known in Korea and many students dream to study there. There are many benefits to study abroad not only learning it's own language but also culture and getting chance to be taught by the most famous professor. If people have graduated from the university in the USA or UK, they are usually treated very well at the company because owners and heads of department consider them as employees who get the highest quality education and expect them to show the high quality performance. However, I don't think the performances at work is directly proportional with educational status. I know it is really difficult to find proper workers with interview when the companies hire their staffs. The scores at university, degrees and the test results on the second languages can be the all that might be reviewed by employers. I don't know exactly what advantages I can get because

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
There are a lot of renowned university around the world which many people would like to enter. 
>>> There are a lot of renowned universities around the world which many people would like to enter. 
Harvard university is well-known in Korea and many students dream to study there.
>>> CORRECT
There are many benefits to study abroad not only learning it's own language but also culture and getting chance to be taught by the most famous professor.
>>> CORRECT
 If people have graduated from the university in the USA or UK, they are usually treated very well at the company because owners and heads of department consider them as employees who get the highest quality education and expect them to show a high quality performance. 
>>> CORRECT
However, I don't think the performances at work is directly proportional with educational status. 
>>> CORRECT
I know it is really difficult to find proper workers with interview when the companies hire their staff. 
>>> CORRECT
The scores at university, degrees and the test results on the second languages can be the all that might be reviewed by employers.
>>> Scores in university and degrees tests results on second languages can be be reviewed by the employers.
 I don't know exactly what advantages I can get because...
>>> CORRECT
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