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If somebody wants to show good manner to some country, he or she has to know about the country's culture.
In my country, Korea, thinks the etiquette of young people to the old very important.
Ex) In the Korea, there is two kinds of speaking, 1. to same age or younger age, 2. to older age.
So if you want to use Korea language in Korea, you have to know about the etiquette that I mentioned earlier.

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Hi John!

South Korea has certain customs, traditions, and rules of etiquette that have developed over the years, and many of them are different than what occurs in most other countries. Same goes with other countries that's why when we visit other places, we should be aware about it. It¡¯s much better to be informed so you can make the best impression possible. Not only will you honor the group, but you¡¯ll also increase your chances of being invited out again.

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If somebody wants to show good manner to some country, he or she has to know about the country's culture.
>>If somebody wants to show good manner in a certain country, he or she has to know about the country's culture.

In my country, Korea, thinks the etiquette of young people to the old very important.
>> In my country, Korea, etiquette among young people towards old people is very important.

Ex) In the Korea, there is two kinds of speaking, 1. to same age or younger age, 2. to older age.
>> In Korea, there are two ways of communicating. The first one is how you talk to people with the same age as you and the other one it how you talk to people who are older than you. 

So if you want to use Korea language in Korea, you have to know about the etiquette that I mentioned earlier.
>> So if you want to show good manners in Korea, you have to know about the etiquette that I mentioned earlier.
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