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Morning Calm Arboretum is probably the prettiest park.

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This is a place in Gapyeong, and it is famous for many people in the spring because flowers grow most beautifull in spring. My mom said to me I have been here twice when I was a kid, but I can't remember. It's really wide, but it's highly recommended because it's well worth the appreciation. For reference, I want to tell you one more beautiful place regardless of the park, I recommend Petite France. If you go to the place where Petite France. Petite France is same as real France. You will feel like you are in France. It is famous as a place where young children come to play with adults, and it is also located in Gapyeong. This place is very hot in summer, so it is recommended to go in autumn or sunny days rather than in summer.
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Hello Maria!

These places are absolutely breathtakingly beautiful! Not only that, they are so colorful and fairytale-like. Someday, I wish to be there. Thanks for sharing these awesome photos and also writing so well about them too!

Have a great night! See you again tomorrow.

-T. Donna =)

This is a place in Gapyeong, and it is famous for many people in the spring because flowers grow most beautifull in spring. 
>> Correct!
Or: beautiful


My mom said to me I have been here twice when I was a kid, but I can't remember. 
>> My mom told me that I have been here twice when I was a kid, but I can't remember. 

It's really wide, but it's highly recommended because it's well worth the appreciation. 
>> Correct!

For reference, I want to tell you one more beautiful place regardless of the park, I recommend Petite France. 
>> Correct!

If you go to the place where Petite France. Petite France is same as real France. 
>> If you go to the place where Petite France is, it is the same as real France. 

You will feel like you are in France. 
>> Correct!

It is famous as a place where young children come to play with adults, and it is also located in Gapyeong. 
>> Correct!

This place is very hot in summer, so it is recommended to go in autumn or sunny days rather than in summer.
>> Correct!

P.S. 1. First picture is <Morning Calm Arboretum> 2. Second picture is <Petite France>
>> Correct!
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