¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

essay

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¼Õ*¸²
2021-05-24 331

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I like nike.
because there is al lot of simple and pretty T shirts
and also the backpack and hat is simple.
almost korean students like to wear nike.
so I like nike

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Hanah,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


I like nike. because there is al lot of simple and pretty T shirt
>>> I like Nike because there are a lot of simple and pretty T-shirts. 

and also the backpack and hat is simple.
>>> Another reason is that their backpacks and hats are simple. 

almost korean students like to wear nike. so I like nike
>>> Almost all Korean students like to wear Nike, so I like it. 
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
108605 What are the things that people don\'t usually know about you? Çã*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 2
108604 What\'s new with you? ¼Û*·É ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 582
108603 Homework ±è*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 1
108602 How do you feel when you see a person so prim and proper? ¾È*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 1
108601 Homework (284) ¹Ú*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 585
108600 What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism... ÃÖ*¾È ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 1099
108599 If a person steals a loaf of bread because he needs to feed his... ±è*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 871
108598 What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism... ÃÖ*¾È ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 2
108597 Homework 5 / 17 / MON ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 789
108596 English competency and my life ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 606
108595 grammar ¼Õ*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 575
108594 HOMEWORK Á¤*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 1
108593 HOMEWORK Á¤*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 1
108592 HOMEWORK Á¤*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 1
108591 report 8-3 ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 429
108590 Report 8-2, ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 479
108589 Report 8-1 ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 511
108588 Homework °­*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 578
108587 Homework °­*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 473
108586 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-17 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04