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There is polite word in korea. But I think there's no polite word in most of country. young people have to use polite word when they talk with older people. but many foreigner didn't use polite word when they talk with older people. This is very rude action in korea. so if you want have good manner in korea, you should learn about polite word.

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Hi Tobby!

South Korea has certain customs, traditions, and rules of etiquette that have developed over the years, and many of them are different than what occurs in most other countries. Same goes with other countries that's why when we visit other places, we should be aware about it. It¡¯s much better to be informed so you can make the best impression possible. Not only will you honor the group, but you¡¯ll also increase your chances of being invited out again.

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There is polite word in korea. But I think there's no polite word in most of country. 
>> There are polite words in Korean but I think there are no polite words in the rest of the world. 

young people have to use polite word when they talk with older people. 
>> Young people have to be polite when it comes to talking to older people. 

but many foreigner didn't use polite word when they talk with older people. 
>> Although many foreigners don't use polite word whenever they talk to older people. 

This is very rude action in korea. 
>> This is a very rude trait here in Korea.

so if you want have good manner in korea, you should learn about polite word.
>> So if you want to show good manners in Korea, you need to learn polite words.  
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