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What advice would you give a foreigner visiting your country who would like to show good menners?

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I think there¡¯s nothing special. Just being polite is everthing. If you need a help, just ask to anyone maybe they will respond kindly. Usually Korean don¡¯t say their opinion directly so I think it¡¯s better to think a lot before you talk.

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Hi Heidi!^^

South Korea has certain customs, traditions, and rules of etiquette that have developed over the years, and many of them are different than what occurs in most other countries. Same goes with other countries that's why when we visit other places, we should be aware about it. It¡¯s much better to be informed so you can make the best impression possible. Not only will you honor the group, but you¡¯ll also increase your chances of being invited out again.

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I think there¡¯s nothing special.
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 Just being polite is everthing. 
>>  Just being polite is everything.
 
If you need a help, just ask to anyone maybe they will respond kindly. 
>> If you need help just ask someone and maybe they will respond kindly. 

Usually Korean don¡¯t say their opinion directly so I think it¡¯s better to think a lot before you talk.
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