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What was your best travel experience so far?

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I think the Vietnam travel was my best experience. Vietnam was the most beautiful place more than where I've been before. And Vietnam's local foods such as beef soup, fried rice and Bun Cha were very delicious to me. Also, when the sun set, the sea there was amazing. That's why l remember traveling to Vietnam was the best.

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Good day, Trina! I am glad that you answered the homework. I am looking forward to see you later in our class. Have a wonderful day ahead! :)
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I think the Vietnam travel was my best experience. 
>> Correct
Vietnam was the most beautiful place more than where I've been before. 
>> Vietnam was the most beautiful place compared to other places I have visited before.
And Vietnam's local foods such as beef soup, fried rice and Bun Cha were very delicious to me.
>> Correct
Also, when the sun set, the sea there was amazing.
>> Correct
That's why l remember traveling to Vietnam was the best.
>> That's why, I remember that traveling to Vietnam was the best experience.
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