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If you can have your own restaurant, what food do you want to serve there?

If I can have my restaurant, I want to serve charcoal-grilled meat in the place especially samgyupsal. I always drink when I meet my friend, and when we order samgyupsal, the best way to cook is charcoal-grilled since the smoke permeates to the meat, and it tastes better than cooked by a pan.

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If I can have my restaurant, I want to serve charcoal-grilled meat in the place especially samgyupsal. 
>> If I can have my restaurant, I want to serve charcoal-grilled meat in the place especially Samgyupsal. 

I always drink when I meet my friend, and when we order samgyupsal, the best way to cook is charcoal-grilled since the smoke permeates to the meat, and it tastes better than cooked by a pan.
>> I always drink and eat Samgyupsal when I meet with my friends. The best way to cook it is charcoal-grilled since the smoke permeates to the meat and makes the taste better than cooking by pan. 
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