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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as n

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It is the major subject to study literature at school. People can select what they study, if they are university students but it is mandatory to study various subjects which are recommended by educational professionals. I think literature help people broaden vocabulary but there are many things people can't understand in the literature such as poems and novels. I had a lot of problem to study these subjects because I couldn't understand the stories in the books although, I tried to find the meaning in the dictionary. My teachers let students read books and wanted us to practice the reading skills. However, I am not sure if it is effective educational way. I believe that reading a book is the most important part when we study something. We can't study any subjects without reading and understanding skills. Sadly, Koreans have to learn Chinese, English and Korean at school. Especially, if people don't understand Chinese language, they can't understand Korean too because we are under the

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there Mr. Hwang~! ^^ It's Thursday and I love it! It's quite gloomy here though, but it's fine. I'm hungry so I don't know what to tell you, hahaha! See you tomorrow!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
It is a major subject to study literature at school. 
>>> CORRECT
People can select what they study, if they are university students but it is mandatory to study various subjects which are recommended by educational professionals. 
>>> People can select what they study, if they are university students but it is mandatory to study various subjects which are recommended by professors.
I think literature help people broaden vocabulary but there are many things people can't understand in the literature such as poems and novels. 
>>> CORRECT
I had a lot of problems to study these subjects because I couldn't understand the stories in the books although, I tried to find the meaning in the dictionary. 
>>> CORRECT
My teachers let students read books and wanted us to practice the reading skills. 
>>> My teachers let students read books and wanted us to practice reading skills. 
However, I am not sure if it is effective educational way.
>>>However, I am not sure if it is an effective education way.
 I believe that reading a book is the most important part when we study something. 
>>> CORRECT
We can't study any subjects without reading and understanding skills.
>>> CORRECT
 Sadly, Koreans have to learn Chinese, English and Korean at school.
>>> CORRECT
 Especially, if people don't understand Chinese language, they can't understand Korean too because we are under the...
>>> CORRECT
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