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What¡¯s the most memorable vacation you¡¯ve had?
The most memorable thing about my vacation was watching Netflix with mom!
Because the Netflix original series was so amazing to me.
Especially we watch the movies with snacks and air conditioner wind in summer night.
Maybe these things make me more happy.
The netflix original series is STRANGER THINGS.
Have you heard the Stranger things ?

What¡¯s the best thing you experienced during your last vacation?
Umm truth be told I didn't have any best experience.
Because Covid 19 made all everyday life to messy.
So after I completed K-SAT, I didn¡¯t have any meetings, trip with my friend.
Just stay in my house with netflix.
Finally I hope the Covid 19 disappear in the world!!

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Good afternoon, JB! Thank you for sending your answers for the homework. Well done! 

Here are some minor corrections for the writing task. :) 

What¡¯s the most memorable vacation you¡¯ve had?

>>The most memorable thing about my vacation was watching Netflix with mom, because the Netflix original series was so amazing to me.
I like it especially when we watch movies with snacks and cool air from the air conditioner during summer nights. These things surely make me happy. 
I like watching the Netflix original series, Stranger Things. Have you heard of Stranger Things? 

What¡¯s the best thing you experienced during your last vacation?

>>Umm truth be told I don't have any best experience yet because the COVID-19 pandemic has made my daily life so much more complicated. 
After I completed the K-SAT, I did not have any meetings nor trips with my friend. I just stayed in the house and watched Netflix. I hope that the COVID-19 pandemic will be over soon. 

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