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Q:Describe your sibling and you, the differences and the similarities.
A:My sibling's hight is similar with there classmates, but I'm taller than my classmates.
And, I like almost all kinds of animals, but my siblings don't.
Next, my siblings, and I am all active, this is first similarity.
Lastly, my siblings and I like junk foods more than the other foods, this is my last similarity.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



Q: Describe your sibling and you, the differences and the similarities.

A: My sibling's hight is similar with there classmates, but I'm taller than my classmates.
>>> My siblings' height is similar to their classmates but I'm taller than my classmates.

And, I like almost all kinds of animals, but my siblings don't.
>>> In addition, I like almost all kinds of animals, but my siblings don't.

Next, my siblings, and I am all active, this is first similarity.
>>> Moreover, my siblings, and I are all active, this is the first similarity that we have.

Lastly, my siblings and I like junk foods more than the other foods, this is my last similarity.
>>> Lastly, my siblings and I like junk foods more than other foods, and this is another similarity we have. 

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