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Challenges improve myself

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There are many challenges in our life and we can face or ignore them. But if you try to face challenges, you can experience many things from them. First, it makes person solve the problem. In my case, my tutor always give me quiet difficult homework. Thanks to my trying, even though I can not finish the task, I learn many things from the process of solving it. And If you do this kind of work again and again, you can find yourself who get used to face difficulties. Then, it will be granted to try hard to do something and you can do it more easily than others. Second, facing problems is also good for mind control. When people notice they are in difficult situation, they can be panic and can not do anything even the situation is not that much serious. However, people who experienced difficulties and solved them already know they don't need to be nervous and they can make themselves calm down.The point is moderate challenges and trying to solve it always makes you strong!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Julia, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin


There are many challenges in our life and we can face or ignore them.
>>There are many challenges in life that we can either  face or avoid. 
But if you try to face challenges, you can experience many things from them.
>>But if you bravely face the challenges that life throws at you, you can overcome a lot of things.  
First, it makes person solve the problem.
>>First, it helps us to be a problem solvers. 
In my case, my tutor always give me quiet difficult homework.
>>In my own experience, my tutor always gives me challenging homework. 
Thanks to my trying, even though I can not finish the task, I learn many things from the process of solving it.
>>Even though I can't always finish the tasks, I am able to  learn a lot of things from the process because of my determination to solve problems. 
And If you do this kind of work again and again, you can find yourself who get used to face difficulties.
>>If you keep on trying, you'll be brave enough to face any challenges that is in front of you. 
Then, it will be granted to try hard to do something and you can do it more easily than others.
>>If you strive with the things you want to achieve, you can get there in no time. 
Second, facing problems is also good for mind control.
>>Facing challenges help you stay centered and remain calm under pressure.
When people notice they are in difficult situation, they can be panic and can not do anything even the situation is not that much serious.
>>When people think that they are in a difficult situation they tend to panic and it makes the situation more difficult. 
However, people who experienced difficulties and solved them already know they don't need to be nervous and they can make themselves calm down.
>> People who experienced difficulties and challenges  know how to remain calm and they can stop negative thoughts in their tracks. 
The point is moderate challenges and trying to solve it always makes you strong!
>>Work smarter rather than harder, persistence is a huge key to overcome challenges.


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