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Q:If you'll be the president of your own company, what kind of company will it be?
A:If I'm the president of my own company, then it will be company about biology.
First, my favorite subjact is biology and I have many informations about biology so it will be about biology.
Second, I can do many expirience about biology, so if I have my own company, then it will be company about biology.
Lastly, I can know more things about animals if I make a biology company, so if there is my own company, then it will be about biology.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

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Q: If you'll be the president of your own company, what kind of company will it be?

A: If I'm the president of my own company, then it will be company about biology.
>>> If I'm the president of my own company, then it will be a company about biology.

First, my favorite subjact is biology and I have many informations about biology so it will be about biology.
>>> First, my favorite subject is biology and I have a lot of pieces of information about biology so my company will be about biology.

Second, I can do many expirience about biology, so if I have my own company, then it will be company about biology.
>>> Second, I can do many experiences about biology, so if I have my own company, then it will be company about it.

Lastly, I can know more things about animals if I make a biology company, so if there is my own company, then it will be about biology.
>>> Lastly, I can know more things about animals if I make a biology company, so if given a chance to have my own company then it will be about biology. 
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