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Q:If you'll be the president of your own company, what kind of company will it be?
A:If I'm the president of my own company, then it will be company about biology.
First, my favorite subjact is biology and I have many informations about biology so it will be about biology.
Second, I can do many expirience about biology, so if I have my own company, then it will be company about biology.
Lastly, I can know more things about animals if I make a biology company, so if there is my own company, then it will be about biology.

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Hello Paul,

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Q: If you'll be the president of your own company, what kind of company will it be?

A: If I'm the president of my own company, then it will be company about biology.
>>> If I'm the president of my own company, then it will be a company about biology.

First, my favorite subjact is biology and I have many informations about biology so it will be about biology.
>>> First, my favorite subject is biology and I have a lot of pieces of information about biology so my company will be about biology.

Second, I can do many expirience about biology, so if I have my own company, then it will be company about biology.
>>> Second, I can do many experiences about biology, so if I have my own company, then it will be company about it.

Lastly, I can know more things about animals if I make a biology company, so if there is my own company, then it will be about biology.
>>> Lastly, I can know more things about animals if I make a biology company, so if given a chance to have my own company then it will be about biology. 
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