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Q. Do you think Korea can finish and end its restrictions within this year? Explain.
A. It depends on the supply of the vaccine. Samsung biologics is going to produce the Coivd19 vaccine by receiving production commission from US pharmaceutical company Moderna Inc.
If it's production going smoothly, Korea can finish and end its restrictions by end of the year. On the other hand, If the production doesn't go smoothly, Korea cant finish a Covid19 pandemic because Korean government failed to secure the enough vaccine.

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Q. Do you think Korea can finish and end its restrictions within this year? Explain.

A. It depends on the supply of the vaccine. Samsung biologics is going to produce the Coivd19 vaccine by receiving production commission from US pharmaceutical company Moderna Inc.
>>> It depends on the supply of the vaccine. Samsung Biologics is going to produce the Coivd19 vaccine by receiving a production commission from the US pharmaceutical company Moderna Inc.

If it's production going smoothly, Korea can finish and end its restrictions by end of the year. 
>>> If its production will go smoothly, then Korea can finish and end its restrictions by end of the year. 

On the other hand, If the production doesn't go smoothly, Korea cant finish a Covid19 pandemic because Korean government failed to secure the enough vaccine.
>>> On the other hand, if the production doesn't go smoothly, Korea can't finish its restrictions regarding the Covid19 pandemic because the Korean government failed to secure enough vaccines.
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