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Which natural disaster do you fear most and why?

In my case, I fear the most earthquake. Most natural disasters don't affect to break a building easily. And, there's some time to prepare by myself to survive. However, if there's a powerful earthquake is occurred, then everything will be shaken immediately, and buildings are being collapsed. So, in terms of survival rate, the earthquake seems to be the most critical one. As of these reasons, earthquake is the most fearest natural disaster for me.

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Hi Homer!

People fear natural disasters because they are disastrous. People's lives and safety are put in danger. Habitats, homes and property are destroyed. Most people would prefer the life (and everything that goes with it) that they live now to life (or lack thereof) that would follow a natural disaster.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

In my case, I fear the most earthquake. 
>>In my case, I fear earthquakes the most. 

Most natural disasters don't affect to break a building easily. 
>> Most natural disasters don't break buildings easily. 

And, there's some time to prepare by myself to survive.
>> There would also be time for me to prepare myself in terms of survival. 

 However, if there's a powerful earthquake is occurred, then everything will be shaken immediately, and buildings are being collapsed. 
However, if there's a powerful earthquake happening, everything will be shaken causing buildings to collapse. 

So, in terms of survival rate, the earthquake seems to be the most critical one. 
>>So in terms of survival rate, earthquake seems to be the most critical one. 

As of these reasons, earthquake is the most fearest natural disaster for me.
>> As for these reasons, earthquakes are the scariest natural disaster for me. 
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