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How would you describe your English communication skills?

I think under usual and casual situations, there's no particular problem to communicate in English.
However, for a professional reason, I communicate in English every day both in a verbal and written way. When I communicate with someone verbally and sporadically, I can have a conversation, but grammatical errors occur frequently and hard to understand sometimes.
Since I know that my grammar is not perfect, I always check by using a translator before sending a messagge. Also, I prepare a script if there's an important meeting to present with the client in which mistakes shouldn't be happend.

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Hi Homer!

You can describe your language skills as Basi‹, Conversational, Fluent, or Proficient.

Basic – you can communicate on simple topics or know some phrases in this language.

Conversational – you can communicate on everyday topics with minor grammar or vocabulary mistakes but you can¡¯t write in this language.

Fluent – you have the ability to express any idea without hesitation, with good vocabulary and grammar; people understand you easily. Both your spoken and written skills are good.

Proficient – different from fluent in the way that you now understand the structure of the language and you can explain how this language works to other people. You also can use idiomatic language and understand local accents.

In terms of your performance, I think your English skills are Fluent. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think under usual and casual situations, there's no particular problem to communicate in English.
>> I think under usual and casual situations, I have no particular problem to communicate in English.

However, for a professional reason, I communicate in English every day both in a verbal and written way. 
>> However professionally, I can still communicate in English every day both in a verbal and written.

When I communicate with someone verbally and sporadically, I can have a conversation, but grammatical errors occur frequently and hard to understand sometimes.
>>When I communicate with someone verbally and sporadically, I can have a conversation.  Although, grammatical errors occur frequently and it can be hard to understand sometimes.

Since I know that my grammar is not perfect, I always check by using a translator before sending a messagge. 
>> Since I know that my grammar is not perfect, I always check by using a translator before sending a message. 

Also, I prepare a script if there's an important meeting to present with the client in which mistakes shouldn't be happend.
>> Also, I prepare a script if there's an important meeting to present with the client in which mistakes shouldn't happened.

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