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What do you think about taking new challenges?

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I think that to having new challenges even though small and insignificant challenges in our life is meaningful.
Sometimes they give us energy and strength.
Of course we have troulesome due to stress that we have to achieve our challenges.
I have some my new challenges.
One of them is to keep the my health.
For this, I try to effort exerse and diet.

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Hi Lily,
Thank you for today's homework!
Have a nice morning and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
What do you think about taking new challenges?
I think that to having new challenges even though small and insignificant challenges in our life is meaningful.
>>I think that facing new challenges in our lives, even though they are small and insignificant ones, can be very meaningful.
Sometimes they give us energy and strength.
>>Sometimes, they can energize and strengthen us.
Of course we have troulesome due to stress that we have to achieve our challenges.
>>Of course, we have troubles due to the stress caused by our efforts in order to overcome these challenges.
or>>Of course, we get stressed because of these challenges.
I have some my new challenges.
>>I am facing some new challenges.
One of them is to keep the my health.
>>One of them is to help myself stay healthy.
For this, I try to effort exerse and diet.
>>For this reason, I try to exercise and go on a diet.

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