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I don't know well about wellness institutions so I just defined wellness programs are just health programs.
Nowadays, a lot of people get high stress so they need wellness programs.
Wellness institutions and the programs can help people to release their stress and make them more lively.

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Very well-said, Jun! It's true that taking health programs is essential for us to have quality life. Stay healthy!-Faith-
I don't know well about wellness institutions so I just defined wellness programs are just health programs.
>> I don't know well about wellness institutions so I just defined wellness programs as just health programs.
Nowadays, a lot of people get high stress so they need wellness programs.
>> CORRECT
OR Nowadays, several people are under stress so they should take wellness programs.
Wellness institutions and the programs can help people to release their stress and make them more lively.
>> Wellness institutions and programs can help people to release their stress and make them more lively.
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