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How would you describe your English communication skills?

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I think I am good at comunicating with English.
I leaved to the Philippines when I was 6 years old, and I came to Korea when I was 8 years old.
So I think I am good at comunicating with English than my friends.
But I have few things to improve about English skills.
I think I have to learn more about grammer, and I have to learn more words.
If I improve about grammer and English words, I think my English skills will be improves.

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Hi John!

You can describe your language skills as Basi‹, Conversational, Fluent, or Proficient.

Basic – you can communicate on simple topics or know some phrases in this language.

Conversational – you can communicate on everyday topics with minor grammar or vocabulary mistakes but you can¡¯t write in this language.

Fluent – you have the ability to express any idea without hesitation, with good vocabulary and grammar; people understand you easily. Both your spoken and written skills are good.

Proficient – different from fluent in the way that you now understand the structure of the language and you can explain how this language works to other people. You also can use idiomatic language and understand local accents.

In terms of your performance, I think your English skills are Fluent. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think I am good at comunicating with English.
>>I think I am good at communicating in English.

I leaved to the Philippines when I was 6 years old, and I came to Korea when I was 8 years old.
>> I lived in the Philippines when I was 6 years old and came back to Korea when I was 8 years old. 

So I think I am good at comunicating with English than my friends.
>> 
So I think I am better at communicating in English than my friends.

But I have few things to improve about English skills.
>> But I have few things to improve about my English skills.

I think I have to learn more about grammer, and I have to learn more words.
>> I think I have to learn more about grammar and vocabulary. 

If I improve about grammer and English words, I think my English skills will be improves.
>> If I improve my grammar and vocabulary, I think my English skills will improve. 

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