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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Anna wants to be animal conservationist because she likes animal.
2. Tell me the contrary idea.
3. Can mammles be marine animal?
4. Mammles give birth to a baby but other animals lay eggs.
5. There's so many common beliefs in Korea and I don't believe It.

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Here's your corrected homework, Clair!
As always, thanks for sending it promptly. Catch you on Wednesday!

Cheers,
Jean~~



                               Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.


1. Anna wants to be animal conservationist because she likes animal.
>> Anna wants to be an animal conservationist because she likes animals.
>> OR: Anna hopes to be an animal conservationist since she loves animals.

2. Tell me the contrary idea.
>> OR: Your idea is contrary to mine. 

3. Can mammles be marine animal?
>> Can mammals be marine animals? [Note the correct spelling of "mammals".]

4. Mammles give birth to a baby but other animals lay eggs.
>> Mammals give birth to their young but other animals lay eggs.

5. There's so many common beliefs in Korea and I don't believe It.
>> There are so many common beliefs in Korea and I don't believe them. 

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